So You Want To Commit Novel: #2

Last week I talked about developing an idea into the opening chapters of a novel.  When I run out of steam on the initial idea and need to stop and take a breath and figure out what comes next, it is time to write a synopsis.  The following is excerpted from a longer article that will appear in a forthcoming Book View Press e-book Brewing Fine Fiction with similar articles from our professional authors.

There are as many right ways to write a synopsis as there are writers. The following format works for me. Feel free to adapt it to your own style.

The format of a synopsis should be the same as for any manuscript. Keep it consistent and easy on the eyes.

An editor needs to know that the author knows the novel has a beginning, a middle, and an end. The synopsis must show this. Some editors require a synopsis be submitted along with a complete manuscript to verify that the author has control of the story. The two documents need to match. Once you have sold one or more books with a complete manuscript, you will sell on partial manuscripts consisting of a synopsis and the first three chapters. Again, your synopsis needs to demonstrate a beginning a middle and an end as well as a flow of action. Never keep secrets from an editor. Reveal the ending as well as the solution to any mystery in your plot.

Writing a synopsis for yourself, sometimes several different ones through the course of completing a book, helps keep you focused on the action/reaction and consequences. If your characters wander off in unexpected directions, this will change the ending of the book. A new synopsis helps you figure out how to make it stronger than your first stab at it. Or if you are tied to the first dynamic ending you envisioned, a new synopsis can guide the action toward it with new twists in the middle.

In a synopsis you may tell rather than show, and use present tense rather than past. A few snappy bits of dialogue can make a point in the synopsis. However, it should only make a point and not demonstrate your ability to write snappy dialogue.  Save that for the manuscript.

Synopses need not be boring. Keeping it interesting and concise is an art form that requires practice. I have been known to take as long or longer on the synopsis as I do to write the first three chapters.

The length of a synopsis varies with its purpose. The one that goes with a query letter to interest an editor or agent should be no more than two pages. Maximum. Cutting a long synopsis down to two pages is HARD. A more efficient method for me is to start with a back cover blurb, 100-150 words that names your protagonist, his/her life goal, the conflict to that goal (antagonist), and the emotional growth the protagonist must go through to overcome the conflict and achieve the goal. Expanding from that can make a concise two pager that works.

The longer synopsis that goes with the chapters or full manuscript depends upon the editor.Ten pages is a nice average.

The synopsis you write for yourself can be whatever length you need it to be. I have known some writers to produce a one hundred page synopsis. To me that is more like a rough draft. I prefer mine to be between ten and twenty pages. The partial I just submitted to sell a new series was nineteen pages plus thirty pages of chapters. It was longer because I needed to include a fair amount of world building. The ones I create to sell additional volumes within a series vary from two paragraphs to twelve pages. Most of the world building has been established with that editor.

Paragraph #1 (optional): a hook.

Real men don’t watch birds for a living; real women don’t ride Harley Hawgs wearing full leathers.

You can also put in a few words about the setting: alternate now, historical Russia, stock fantasy medieval, or whatever.

P#2: Protagonist. Show the character’s goal, conflict to that goal, and emotional growth necessary to overcome the conflict and achieve the goal (sound familiar?). Physical descriptions are not necessary, unless they are part of the conflict, i.e. a handicap or unacceptable cultural bias against certain features or coloring. Include professions, age, family situation, only if they help define the character.

P#3: Secondary Protag. Same as above plus their relationship to the primary protag.

P#4: Antagonist. Same as above.

(Use as many character sketches as you must. Try to limit to primaries or Point Of View characters.)

P#5: Back Story. This is a short recap of what brings us to the action that begins on Page 1 of the book.

P#6-P#20 (or however many paragraphs you need): Plot. Recount major plot points and transitions. Remember to show characters reacting to action and growing. Do not forget that the book has a middle as well as a beginning. I often go to my plotting tools and pick out the scenes that demonstrate the stages of the hero’s journey as identified by Joseph Campbell.

P#21: Crisis. This is when the world comes crashing down around your protag’s ears.

P#22: Dark Moment. The characters have to hit bottom in order to compromise or consider doing the unthinkable to defeat the villain. Out of the frying pan into the fire.

P#23: Climax. This is the final twenty minutes of murder and mayhem at the end of the movie.

P#24: Resolution. Tie up loose ends, or as many as you can and still leave an opening for the sequel. Keep this as short as possible. This is the wedding at the end of the romance, not the rest of their lives together.

With a little practice, writing a synopsis becomes a familiar and comfortable part of the process of creating a novel.

Phyllis Irene Radford blogs here regularly on Thursdays, the same day her cozy mystery “Lacing Up For Murder” by Irene Radford is serialized on the front page rotation.

For more about her and her fiction please visit her bookshelf here on BVC http://www.bookviewcafe.com/index.php/Phyllis-Irene-Radford/

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About Phyllis Irene Radford

Irene Radford has been writing stories ever since she figured out what a pencil was for. A member of an endangered species—a native Oregonian who lives in Oregon—she and her husband make their home in Welches, Oregon where deer, bears, coyotes, hawks, owls, and woodpeckers feed regularly on their back deck. A museum trained historian, Irene has spent many hours prowling pioneer cemeteries deepening her connections to the past. Raised in a military family she grew up all over the US and learned early on that books are friends that don’t get left behind with a move. Her interests and reading range from ancient history, to spiritual meditations, to space stations, and a whole lot in between. Mostly Irene writes fantasy and historical fantasy including the best-selling Dragon Nimbus Series and the masterwork Merlin’s Descendants series. In other lifetimes she writes urban fantasy as P.R. Frost or Phyllis Ames, and space opera as C.F. Bentley. Later this year she ventures into Steampunk as someone else. If you wish information on the latest releases from Ms Radford, under any of her pen names, you can subscribe to her newsletter: www.ireneradford.net Promises of no spam, merely occasional updates and news of personal appearances.

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So You Want To Commit Novel: #2 — 4 Comments

  1. Average page count is really hard as it varies from book to book, but I try really hard to keep it around 10 pages. Bare bones plot, more about character growth and transitions.

  2. Hmm. That could be interesting if the publisher/agent wants more or less.

    I suppose once you have a publisher you can stick to their format.

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